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One thing I think you could work on is the composition of the photo -- she's not quite centered or off-centered, she's sort of in an awkward middle ground. The rule of thirds would help you out a lot here, perhaps if she was a little further to the right, leaving more black space on the left side, it would create more impact compositionally. I also think a warmer light would suit her wonderfully; it would bring out the gold in her hair and warm her skin up, just be careful not to go too warm and create a yellow overcast. 8Db Great job, keep up the good work!
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